I want to start off by saying this post isn’t me telling you all about criminal psychology. No, this post is all about writing characters. Not just any characters. This is about your antagonist, whether it’s the person your hero owes money to, or the devil himself.
Of course, any advice must be taken with a grain of salt, because your writing is yours and yours alone. I could give a hundred tips over my years of fabricating stories, but right now, I’m talking about one of the things that by far bugs me the most.
Every story needs an antagonist. I’m not telling you to get rid of yours, no matter who or what it is. No, the thing I’m offering today is three things you need to avoid doing when it comes to creating your demon overlord, or evil stepmother, or whoever your Big Bad might be.
#1: The Talking Mannequin.
If your evildoer is actually a mannequin haunting a department store, that’s fine. But if it’s not, make sure it doesn’t seem that way! Too many times have I read books where the antagonist has absolutely no personality. He (let’s be honest, it’s usually a ‘he’) walks around kicking puppies and stealing children’s candy, but he does nothing distinguishing in the process! How boring is that? Make him have a weird laugh. Make him depressed when his friend dies. Make him have an obsession with kitten figurines. If he’s got nothing unique and quirky about him, he doesn’t seem like a real person anymore. It’s no fun reading about a human looking puppet.
#2: The Slobbering Idiot
Please don’t have your villain slobber, because that’s just gross. But also, don’t make him stupid. Just don’t. A villain that’s moronic isn’t much of a villain, is he? If your Big Bad can govern armies, he’s going to notice it when you break in and impersonate his right hand man. If it’s some lady who kidnapped your dog, don’t just switch that dog with another one. Not only is it mean to the second puppy, but it’s also insulting her intelligence. A smart kidnapper is entertaining. It’s more gripping, watching your hero’s struggle to trick her, to always be two steps behind. If it was easy, it wouldn’t be much of a story.
#3: Pure Evil
Like the post name suggests, nobody is born evil. Okay, maybe some people are, but they’re few and far between. If your mannequin is haunting the store, I’m sure he’s got a good reason. Maybe a lady mannequin was destroyed in the incinerator. Maybe the spirit of the dead janitor who never got his pension possessed it. There is always a reason, even for crazy people. The reason might be as simple as avenging a dead parent (which in my opinion happens far too often). But your Big Bad better have a good reason for being so cruel- the foundation of your story depends on it.